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Learn to Love Again

Once loved but now disposed:
Neon jumpsuits
Disco ball
Jelly shoes

Neon jumpsuit saved your life while biking at dusk.
Kissed under that disco ball at your first boy-girl party.
Jelly shoes made you feel like the prettiest 2nd grader.

Learn to love again:
Neon patches on jeans from neon jumpsuits
Weekend D.I.Y. project fixing the broken disco ball
Still life oil painting of worn, smelly, jelly shoes

Trashed in physical presence,
forever treasured in memory.

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Prompt: Trash

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  • alexandrathegreat
    January 25, 2008

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    This seems more like a note to self then a poem, but that is what I like about it unique. The specifics are a delight. Thank you for entering.

  • Virginia Logsdon
    January 9, 2008
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    Sentimental and creative!