I got my ass kiCKed
by a FucKiN UNworthy BITCH.
I'm sure she was high,
She was clearly prepared -
I was very off guard,
never fought prior, was a little bit scared....
Well, the little dick,
she won. Thought StiLL causes a TwItCh...
On that fateful nigh -
I swore on my hair -
Claimed it wouldn't be hard,
to seek my RevEnGe. Her heart out I sWorE to tear....
REveNGe is for the gLoopy ones,
oh my liTTle broThers and sisTers.
I knew this then,
and people said
'Don't hunt the FuCkEr down,
worthy of no one's time, that FUCK...'
And while I bitch and moan still some,
and feel it rage inside like a twister...
I called for Zen
within mine head...
She's really just a (drug-fucked) cock town...
Once I forget her again, in nothingness she's stuck...
Author notes
See? (ill-placed though it may be) It DoeS exist out here in the realm of Allpoetry!
I half-triumphed over myself. Revenge is pointless. It's not fear that holds me back, it's lack of opportunity... and considering EVERY SINGLE time I've seen the little cunty since the fight, I've been 100% ill-equipped, it doesn't seem meant to be.
It was fear holding me back for a few weeks, though... heh, you wait until I DO seek her out...
I tried to not swear, but... I feel untrue to myself referring to It and not throwing some filthy slovos at ... It.
Thanks for reading !
(P.S. To my faithfuls... hows the new style?)
Enjoi!!
A contest entry
- Where be your army? by Pixie Girl.
400 points, ended January 17, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, uh... didja like it?
Comments
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Wow...just...wow. Heehee, I love the fact that you have an incredible aura radiating off from this emotions in this poem. And yeah, I can totally understand the swears, and the need for them in order to portray our...rage at a person. I tend to use them too much because they are all I really know to express the basis of all negative feelings against them. A well written vent. No complaints on experimenting with new styles, so well done, girlie! ^_^
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Overall? No.
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