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I Remember, Mom

Missing image

two years ago, the fifth

of January...

you breathed your last

breath

 

I'd not yet grasped 

the reality

that you went...

 

where angels were to tread

 

but prepared, you were....

 

for in loving and

in living

you brought to this daughter...

 

 

joy that will never end,

love in her mama's arms

knowledge of true woman-hood

instinct,

to protect.. my young

tools,

for standing.. my ground

intuition and strength,

to be ...

 

my....

        ...mother's

                      ...daughter

 

 

 

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    January 31, 2008

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    Excellent

    An Excellent tribute to your Mom--very sincere !!---
    If you get a chance, visit my site and click on--
    "We Watched Our Mom"--I think you will relate to it.
    Your web-site is beautiful--So is your writing !!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    Heart wrenching write my dear

    For my mother spoke to me in this write for sure for she had always been the angel that taught me the right way to live through love and careing for all .Bravo this desrved a gold trophy indeed


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      January 12, 2008
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      THANK YOU! I don't think there will ever be a more precious relationship in my life, than the one with my Mom.


      (Mary)


  • midnight eyes
    January 9, 2008
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    This is very pretty. Keep up the great work.



    Amber


  • paullallady silver member
    January 9, 2008

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    This brought tears to my eyes, for I also have lost my mother 8 years ago. You spoke the words that we would all loved to have said to our mothers. thank you for this poem.

  • Virginia Logsdon
    January 8, 2008

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    Lovely!

    This is a beautiful tribute to your momma.You really think about all the good things they did after they're gone-huh?

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