Toxic ooze
glowing
during midnight's play.
Polluter's magic act
makes disappear
when government
attends performance.
Author notes
prompt - don't look my way
A contest entry
- Prompt to inspire # 4 by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 9, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Fresh look
This is short, concise and to the point. It offers humor and a smile without loosing sight of a serious problem where corporate enities will cut cost anyway possible even it means leaving others to live in buried waste to inhale cancer and death in the earth.
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Boy that's for sure. A magic act involving covering everything with cash!
We need more writing on this subject.
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Very profound and deeply intriguing... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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WHOA... What a take What a take...
Love it Best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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0ooh nice !
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Very well done as always...strong and deep...fitting to the promt so well...
Creative as you are...
Great work!
Love
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Simple and yet profound!
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how come you never give me simple pieces such as this? I think that you do it on purpose
good job ap dad
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Potent!
A very wonderfully expressed piece brother!
Thanks for sharing, all the best within the contest!
Peace, bro Timothy
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