How I love that smile on her face,
That warm embrace,
That sparkle in her eyes,
The love that never dies,
The laughter that sings,
The happiness it brings,
The kiss of life,
The ending of all strife,
The life of laughter and fun,
The prize we've won,
The wishes came true,
Oh, how I love you!
Author notes
Written for my love ^_^
A contest entry
- Contest for many types of poems, Prewrites allowed. by Systems Malfunction.
500 points, ended January 30, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance by Frodofan.
600 points, ended February 9, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For your best PW! by Reanna Eryn.
550 points, ended March 16, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think
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Aww, this was sooo sweet of you to write for the one you love.
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Such a Hallmark ring to it...pretty...
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Thanks for entering.
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This is sweet and simple. Maybe slightly too simple, but not too bad. It would fit fine in my contest and had a better rhythm then most in it so far, so I do invite you to enter it in.
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plain, simple, but full of so much emotion, i love it.
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sweet, just plain and simply put this is a sweet poem, i know she has to have enjoyed this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This was well done. Its a sweet love poem. Not to often do I see pieces done in the AABB rhyme scheme any more. Good job!
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hmmmm do you think that if i changed all the hers to yours in this poem that i could submit it to hallmark? that would be awesome ^_^
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