le petit renard roux
jouant autour du goudron
-voyez ses pattes noirs!
for dabney
Author notes
the little red fox
mucking about in the tar-box
-see! his black paws
In a list
A contest entry
- Pixiku 24/7 summer, winter, spring or fall by SEA angel.
360 points, ended January 20, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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C'est si bon!
I saw the fox from Le Petit Prince.
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I wrote it for my son; he has very nice auburn hair but he'd taken to dying it black!
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very nice
very nice haiku variation or pixiku write . . liked "le petite renard roux" and "voyez ses pattes noirs!" . . congrats on the trophy . .
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tres bon
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Merci DogFish! Enjoyed the french lesson of the day. THANKS also for the english translation!!
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Tres bon et belle. And my french is a little rusty so if that didn't say 'very good and beautiful' that's what I meant
Thanks for your comment, good luck.
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Excellent!
This is nothing less than EXCELLENT if what is in author's comment is a translation. A burst of imagery leaps out of your words.
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I love that this is in french, really adds a nice soft edge to it
Creative and pretty.
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