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Love ME

You say you love me but you really don't,
the pain shoots through me like a bow'n'arrow.
Now I wonder what happens now,
Are you gonna stay?
Are you gonna go?

You say you need me but push me away,
I ask you why and all you say is,
Leave me alone,
just go away!

Love hurts, stay away,
Love hurts, keep away from it
Love hurts, stay away,
Love hurts, just keep away!

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Written in lyric form!
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  • oldphotosonlybringt
    January 26, 2008

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    lol i love your aurthor notes lol so random..but back to your poem it was great i liked it bunches i am sure a lot of others can understand where you are comeing from in this one great work keep it up sweetie and thanks for entering mucho love