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Beginning of the End

Forbidden, that tantalizing chance.
Watching for that telling glance.
Transitioning, proper to familiar.
Waiting, desire unable to deter.
Anticipation,  excitement in store.
Dancing, butterflies new once more.

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  • Polaja
    January 8
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    Welcome to AllPoetry ... this is a beautiful poem... there is a comma after every first line word except the second? Is this for a reason? Sorry I just like patterns in poetry... this is a wonderful piece... and I love the way you have penned the sentiment.

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • jessebyrons
    January 8
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    Well described with a nice flow, I enjoyed reading this.