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A Train Wreck

Deal with it.
You think i am scum
You loathe everything i am
and everything i stand for
we fight
scream
kick and hit
But you can't help but still love me
You used to call me your little train wreck
You loved to watch me go off the tracks
and fall down to the ground

Deal with it
You still smile when i am mentioned
Your dreams are of the twinkle in my eye
And of the way i felt when in your arms.
We hugged.
Kissed.
Walked hand in hand.
And you cant help but love me still.
You hope and pray for the day
I will come back to you.
But I am still too far off track.

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yeahhhhh..... soooo.....

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 28, 2008
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    "Deal with it.
    You think i am scum
    You loathe everything i am
    and everything i stand for
    we fight
    scream
    kick and hit
    But you can't help but still love me
    You used to call me your little train wreck
    You loved to watch me go off the tracks
    and fall down to the ground" Great job. I liked the whole poem.
    ..<3..
    Shelly