seering pain runs through my eyes
a screem released in the air
tingle of frost rises up from my toes
and confined in a case of glass
cold rises up my legs
ooh the pain unimmaginable
the walls come closer
a puppet controled to take pain
tears run and instantly freeze
crushed to nothing
heat on a steak melts my skin
a whail reliesed into the sky
blood runs down my forhead
gashes into my body
my muscle rendered useless
i wither to nothing
i wake to bloody tears from my eyes
then fall back and die
A contest entry
- You have COMPLETE CREATIVE FREEDOM!!!!!!!! by Twosoulsasone.
465 points, ended January 23, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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interesting
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Good job. Simple and short yet packed with a punch. good write. Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck.
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