Give me time to breathe-
This I beg of you.
Can't you understand?
That I am trying to find my place-
In this fucked up world?
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Why must I always seek out for more?!
Why cannot I just be satisfied!
I've got a mom, I've got two sisters,
I've got three cats and two dogs!
I've a cell phone, a car and license-
I even have a roof over my head!
Why am I not satisfied?!
Why am I not satisfied?
Why am I not satisfied?
Damn you, I say!
Why am I not satisfied?!
Where are the answers?
The answers I have requested?
Where is peace and serenity?
On this planet we call Earth?!
And... Where in God's name...
Is my place in a land so cold-
full of hate- a land of no hope...
Author notes
Some confusing and hard times and built up emotion... I just needed to write as to not lose complete sanity. but really when you think about it...
Where is our place in a land so cold?
A contest entry
- What ever comes from the heart by oldphotosonlybringt.
360 points, ended January 26, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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WOW THIS ONE IS SORT OF LIKE MY ONE LAST BREATHE AND I LIKE IT IT'S WAY DEEP THOUGH AND I KNOW THE FEELING I HAVE ALL I WANT AND YET I FEEL EMPTY INSIDE I KNOW HOW IT ALL GOES GOOD LUCK LOVE THIS POEM.
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great poem sweeetie i amloveing it lots
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