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Vampire kiss

One kiss may be good and pure,
the other full of poison,
it may be for the sweetest reason,
or it my just lead to destuction,
the vampire kiss is the best of all,
one with romance,no destruction involved,
but some vampires are suductive,
be careful where you play,
or you just might recieve, the last thing you need,
others are sweet, like the way they see blood,
but the evil ones, are demonic and demanding,
one vampire kiss ive dreamed about for ages,
is the where my wildest dreams were created,
and that one kiss was just created

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  • Blood666
    March 7, 2008
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    that was sweet as blood
    i liked it great job

  • heartofpainfultears
    January 21, 2008
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    wow nice work

  • Crazy-Carla
    January 14, 2008
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    very awesome I loved it good luck in the contest...


  • scribbleheart
    January 12, 2008
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    woah..

    definately very cool..i love kiss poems. they are so romantic!!


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    January 10, 2008

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    Nice job on this. vampires awesome, I enjoyed reading it. best of luck in the contest although with an entry like this you won't need it!



    -Steve-

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