Im a country woman
No malls, cafe's for me
Open space, good clean air
I live my fantasy.
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Prompt - Country Woman
A contest entry
- Prompt to inspire # 2 by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 8, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like short and to the point but such depth inbetween those words wonderfully written and also a wonderful way of life
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Yes you have always been straight to the point,
Thankyou for your comment
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xxx
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great loveit...
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thankyou for your comment
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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thankyou my friend xx
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i also share the dream of being a country woman, living with clean air my society has not provoided.i feel bad tat you cannnot see what it's like to be a city slicker. living myday to day fantasy. i agree that malls are turning us into oiled mechanical animals of the establishment. that we are all being controlled by robots to eat drink and go to malls. our routine and binding us and it just may be our death. i am very proud and i respect your ways of being a country woman. i actually loook up to you when it comes to think a bout it. i would love to live out my fantasies like you do. ever since i was a little girl ive always had such strong fantasies that i grew up wanting to live out. i love open spaces, and good clean air. being an asthmatic, i enjoy good clean nice fresh air. i need it for my lungs. i dont need it like water in my lungs. speaking of water in lungs, my great aunt died from this. and i am horrified to think that my great aunt would still be with us today if more people in this world were country woman like you. keeping the air clean for everyone to breathe. strong woman like you who fight the power everyday are the strength of our economy. i hope you, and lavender butterfly the best of luck wtih this contest.
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thankyou for your visit and i wish you well in all your endevours, Be well xx
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cute and sweet.
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thankyou for having a read i wish you well
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