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City smog.

 

 

 

Clear skies at night

and cow shit,

releases the woman.

City smog, concrete gray

oppresses her.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 9, 2008

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    Oh isnt this truth.
    Well done and best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 8, 2008
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    xxx


  • creationsfromheart
    January 8, 2008
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    lol now I am smelling cow chips haha a good writew


  • Cannonsfire
    January 8, 2008

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    Oh to be in the country, look at the stars and find the real world so many miles away, that is peace, that is serenity and that is home. Love,C


  • Pure Thought silver member
    January 8, 2008
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    I am always for the woman,

    being released.
    Buddy

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