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Jason's Kiss

He touches my face and kisses me softly.
I feel the passion in each and every kiss.
His lips put a spell over me.
I am mesmerized, such a sweet bliss.

Reaching for his hand,
I imply I want another.
Kisses are better when spontaneous rather than planned.
A love like this, I could never find in another.

The first time our lips locked, we were so nervous to fail.
We stared for what seem like hours.
It took me a while to open my eyes and exhale.
I live for Jason's sweet kisses and long romantic showers.

Author notes

He is the best thing that has ever happened to me and I can tell he loves me.... I feel it in his kiss.

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  • buggles
    January 17, 2008

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    wonderful

    to feel the butterflies inside when you kiss is a wonderful thing, and so was your poem. I loved it, Eddy


  • parntsoftwins
    January 14, 2008

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    Very well written, you can feel the love and passion within the poem. Well chosen words and form. Hugs,Nikki


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 10, 2008

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    Beautiful young love, filled with sweetness and deep happiness. Your words held me close and the flow told it all~ Thank you so much for sharing with me and flow entering


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 9, 2008

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    Nice write here

    I know that kiss and yes it seems their is some connection when both parties feel the difference of a true loving kiss


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 9, 2008

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    Sounds like there is more than kisses you enjoy about this man. Liked the flow and the visuals one gets when reading these lines. Easy to read and understand what is being said.

  • nostalgicdreamer416
    January 8, 2008

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    i really really like this....i'm very happy for you and i can feel the love in your poem.....great job :]


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 8, 2008

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    This is awesome! It's a wonderful feeling
    when you find someone that makes you feel
    this way and even better when you know it
    deep down inside of your heart. I hope you
    have many more years together my friend!
    Well done and thanks a lot for sharing this
    piece here! Good luck to you with it and
    keep up the wonderful work here!




    Jeremy0826

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