When your arms embrace my soul,
And draw me to your love.
When your kisses surround my lips,
Taking me far above.
When your hands caress my face,
My knees fall to the ground.
When your eyes are all I see,
To your faith I’m bound.
With every little second, every hug and kiss,
My life is lifted into eternal bliss.
Author notes
4)Love, forbidden love, broken love, sexy love etc (If you choose this keep in mind that I wouldn't be able to read anything marked under adult etc)
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: PICTURE PROMPT by Jeremy0826.
1400 points, ended January 11, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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hey sorry for the confusion but can you please enter this contest instead
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2403891
i am deleting this one
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wow..i have to agree..this was just..perfect!...short and sweet..I especially liked these lines,
"When your eyes are all I see,
To your faith I’m bound.
With every little second, every hug and kiss,
My life is lifted into eternal bliss."
Amazing write, thank you for entering and good luck =) -
'yes. perfect.' I don't know what the yes refers to but this is so true!
Thankyou for entering and good luck
Katie -
yes. perfect.
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Thank you for entering
With every little second, every hug and kiss,
My life is lifted into eternal bliss.
I love these last two lines.
Well done. A very true and touching write.
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Thank you for your entry in our contest. It was a lovely poem to read.
Please consider entering the final contest in the series. You can enter two poems, must be new writes, pre-writes will be DQ'd.
We look forward to reading your work
Sue and Jeff
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*deep sigh*
That was damn good! 'Nuff said!
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Love and beauty exudes from your written words. Beautiful poem. Still time to wish you good luck in the contest.
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WOW OUTSTANDING
I loved the rhyme was excellent. Your word flowed so beautifully. Good luck amazing write.
LISA
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This is quite lovely. The rhythm is nice and the wording sincere and full of emotion. Love this. Great work. Keep it up. Good luck in the contest
~Krys~
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the flow and feelings this poem give is perfect
the rhyme is divine
for it feels like you have captured
the feelings of the two in the picture.
Joann -
I love the first two lines the most, a lovely poem you have written from the picture...
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Beautiful work here!
What a wonderful feeling to have
someone in your life that makes
you feel this way. Thanks a lot
for your entry and good luck to
you with it in my contest! Keep
up the wonderful work here my friend!
Jeremy0826
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Thank You Very Much
Thank you very much for your kind words
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