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pictures to be cheerful

There is no escape from reality
try as one might it will always come back to the mind

Infinite ramblings while away the hours as the cock crows in the morning so too does the ache in my soul,

How long before you escape once more only to realise that, that which you seek is inside you all along,standing next to you each morning and laughing at your jokes.
Feasting at you're naive attempts to swim with the tide and forgoe the natural conclusion,
I can only wait enraptured by your beauty.

My only hope is that you find the same reality as I.


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  • penman gold member
    January 14, 2008
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    Excellent

    Terrific poem for the picture. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Creatress silver member
    January 14, 2008

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    this is great, my favorite thing I have read in a while. The picture is amazing, you wrote for it, sensational job.

    Creatress


  • quantumsurveyor
    January 10, 2008

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    click, click...exactly so. Might benefit humorlessly or otherwhen by subbing naive for niave. Long may your lumb reek.....Scottish greeting.


  • Stride
    January 10, 2008

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    Ooh, I like this. It makes me think of how I think the sun shines out my friend's as, despite how cynical I am by nature. Good luck on your contest!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 8, 2008

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    Glad you clicked on this contest. You did a great job.
    Thank you for entry and good luck in the contest.
    Soulful Woman

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