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Love Brings Me here.

Love brings me here again
by her side just holding hands,
like when we were fifteen
and she wasn’t giving up
anything but those sweet kisses.

Love brings me here again,
back to square one,
fifty years together now,
prostrate-less  old man
She saying.
She’s satisfied with
just me holding her.

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  • Beanbiscuit
    January 18, 2008

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    This love has brought the warmest breeze to the winter cold; it will outlive the time and the space.


  • LeftAccount
    January 10, 2008
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    This poem was so sweet and well-written. Great job!


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    January 8, 2008

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    aaww...!!!!

    that is super cute i loved it it was sweet great poem i am so adding you as a finalist [what can i say i am sucker for these type of poems lol] oh well keep it up and hope your good love lots Endless-lover