What I wouldn't give
To be in your arms now.
To share a hug so warm
It would melt all the snow in the world,
To feel skin as soft as cotton
Pressed against mine,
To see a sweet and innocent smile
That would take all my worries away,
To whisper I love you over and over,
To plant angel kisses all over you.
You are so beautiful
That when our eyes meet,
I am under your spell.
Once we are in each other's arms
I want it to last forever.
What I wouldn't give
To be in your arms now.
Author notes
For my beloved Jammi. I want to thank the person who made this contest possible. This was the perfect means for me to, once again, express my feelings to the woman that I love.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: PICTURE PROMPT by Jeremy0826.
1400 points, ended January 11, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Poems. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I still know you wish this very wish....but a wish is just a dream without a plan
Mylee -
This was a beautiful poem you have penned. So full of love and caring and s pleasure to read this evening. Have a great night.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Awh, I can really relate to this a lot.
A simple write, as well as short, but indeed full of love. I hope your wish comes true.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Hoodwinked
Aww, this is beautiful. i wish i can have angel kisses. Any kisses would be nice. It is such a sweet poem and congrats on your ailen trophy. -
Hood-wink
Longing and loving. I like the part about melting the snow. How I want some warm weather! The repetition at the end balanced it nicely.
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HOODWINKED!
You expressed your love well, this is clearly a poem written directly from the heart ( the best kind) and one can't deny that the message is L.O.V.E. ... LOVE!
well done. You have just been ambushed by another member of The Poetic Bandits, I hope you enjoy your day! Suzi
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Hoodwink!
What a very sweet, beautiful and tender message you radiate within the lines of this poem. It sort of has a sad egde to it though, as while I was reading this, I had the feeling this is about a past relationship with somebody you still have a lot of feelings for
I hope I'm wrong on that though...
Leander
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Hoodwinked!!!
Wonderfully expressed.so full of emotion. great imagery with very sweet and sincere work here. I am sure that whoever you wrote this for will love it! keep writing! you have been hoodwinked by a poetic bandit. God bless you always
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HOOD WINKED
How beautiful is this piece of poetry. You are very lucky if your love is still with yhou. Be sure to cherish her for you never know what fate has in storew for you. Let her know you love her for tomorrow could be the last.
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Hood-Winked!
What a beautiful and heartfelt poem for the one you love. I know she will love it. Amazing imagery and emotion throughout. I so enjoyed reading please keep up the wonderful writing
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Hood-Winked!!!
This was so sweet,
I hope someone writes like this to me,
but in God's timing.
And you are an amazing writer,
this was very sweet,
and tender.
Did she read it?
..Simply Me♥
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very sweet
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Beautiful words flowing from your heart. Great imagery. One can feel the love in your words of expression. Good luck in the contest.
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Wonderfully expressed
Wow what a beautiful write I love this line. Its so heartfelt;
"It would melt all the snow in the world,
To feel skin as soft as cotton
Pressed against mine,"
LISA
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What an amazing amount of feeling you have managed to convey here in this poem. I truly love this. So sincere and sweet. I hope your lady appreciates what she has in your poetic soul. Good luck in this contest hon.
~Krys~
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Your words tell how you feel
with just a special flair
Best of luck to you in the contest
Joann -
this is one of them poems that makes you awwwwwwww, sighs with sweetness of course, such a sweet write.
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Wow, I really love this one!
Very sweet and sincere work here.
I am sure that whoever you wrote
this for will love it! Well done!
Thanks so much for your entry in
my contest and I wish you the best
of luck with it! Keep up the wonderful
work here my friend!
Jeremy0826
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Awwww
Lol
Daddy this was so amazing,
so sweet.
Great job.
..Simply Me♥ -
Simply beautiful bro
I was swept away by the feeling of love you have for Jammi
a wonderful write
wishing you all the best in the contest
~sugar~
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