Stars gather and wink,
above the fresh consummation of love.
Reincarnation catches a ride,
upon showers of lunar light.
She breathes…
crisp evening winds.
Serene chills sweep under her skin.
Knowing now, she is eternally changed.
Author notes
Artist Credit:"Deep Breath" Melonie Weidner http://www.listenforjoy.com/prints.html
A contest entry
- 40 Golden Poets.... {Invite Only} by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended February 7, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A lovely take on the depth frozen in image. Great use of imagery to suit emotions coursing within. Thank you so much for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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Nicely written. I get the feeling that in nine months she will be certain of the "eternal change"...
until exhale,
homewrecker -
interesting take on the prompt. But I liked the reincarnation part. good luck in the contest
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sublime, soft and oh so excellent
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What a wonderful picture that prompts this poem - amazing write as well. Think that last line is very fitting.
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This is beautiful,
it has a spiritual connection and is very soothing to read.
great poem.
Dolores x
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This is just lovely and so knowing of self and re-birth. Beautifully written and presented. Best of luck in this contest. Very well done. ~Pamela
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I especially like the second stanza... nah, looking back, I can't say that I like one stanza more than the other... the two stanzas work very well together, a very strong piece, as a whole, filled with imaginative descriptions...
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Excellent
Very powerful and well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Anticipation sated...
You are indeed going through transformation.
Wonderful words that need no image to base them.
great job
ken
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peaks at a blank page with imagination's anticipation
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