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Empire of Saints

Who will write your love songs
When the moment of truth has passed
And your body is exalted
As a shrine to worship at
As a shrine for pilgrims to gather at

Will they place flowers at your feet?
Maybe picnic on the grass
Take icons of you to their heart
As they wander in a daze
As they ponder on their ways

And who will build your monument
Upon this rock and stone
Then fire up the furnace bright
When your martyrdom turns to lace
And your memory becomes a lost cause

So come trip the light fantastic
Dance with saints around your soul
Become the martyred maiden fair
As much as your conscience can bare
As much as your heart can hold

Who will write your love songs then
When the moment of truth has passed

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lyrics about building monuments to a love with feet of clay...

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  • redhanded
    December 5, 2008

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    hmm vey nice write i enjoyed it
    i love the flow
    and the over all images and message
    you have displayed thanks so much
    for your entry
    best of luck to you in the future
    and with your writing
    andi
    (redhabded)


  • your angers a gift
    September 30, 2008
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    cool write...thanks for entering


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    January 8, 2008

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    Dance with saints around your soul

    As much as your conscience can bare
    As much as your heart can hold

    i loved these lines but the poem all in all was amazing keep this up and best luck to you in the contest..


  • islekine gold member
    January 8, 2008

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    Very interesting write!

    I like what you have penned..."Take icons of you to their heart" one of my favotite lines....
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • tarcus
    January 8, 2008
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    like a lot

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