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Dare

He's the moon that dares to shine
The waves that reach the shore
The thorn in the side of the bigoted man
The poet that I adore

It's 2008
And still there is hate
Innocents judged
Leaving heaven to fate

To save one man
To make someone think
To take them to water
Convince them to drink

This is Jaie
His words are his soul
Not ink on a page
But an ultimate goal



Author notes

Jaie...I hope you like this. I wrote it from deep within as a message of solidarity and love. More than any poet I have ever read, you have touched me and enlightened my soul. Thank you x

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  • wendymolly
    January 20, 2008

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    Jaie is a very fortunate man! Very Heartwarming and even more so of Grace!! Very hard to find such words, but you have by far... Effortlessly! Reading these thoughts heightens the goodness in every soul!!!!!!!!

  • jaie2007
    January 8, 2008
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    I'm not worthy of your words.

    I have no idea what to say but "Thank you"!!!!

    I'm on Cloud 9!! You're the best!!