I need to apologize,
for almost ruining what we have.
I was blind to the fact,
I didn't understand.
I messed up badly,
and I hope you will accept,
this note written from my heart,
and accept this.
I apologize for cheating,
and almost being like the others,
I just hope you can realize,
I really am worlds different.
Most girls would say,
oh well,
and move on,
I'm not willing to accept an end,
to this special of love.
I will prove to you,
that my love is true.
I will earn that trust back,
becuase I love you.
Author notes
I cheated on my fiancee, with many guys online. I regret every second of it and hope he can see that in time
Mark Twain:
Always tell the truth. That way, you don't have to remember what you said.
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Very sweet and tender poem asking for forgivness. So many people find it difficult (nearly impossible) to admit when they have messed up and apologize, but you have done this so beautifully here.
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first i am SUPER happy you know what you did was messed up, good for you.
As the poem amazing work right here i love it lots thanks for entering a great poem i hope everything works out with your man and you love lots sweetie
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once trust is gone.....time to move on
you can never win it back
yes you can you may shout
but deep down in the heart will always be doubt
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I will win his trust back. it will take time but trust can be won back. im never moving on, i wont give up what i have with him.
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