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Day by Day

Each day I deflect my depression
with thoughts of something subtle.
Simplicity to drown out my complexity
and shiny trinkets to curb my obsessions.

It is a daily battle
and the troops come in waves,
but I raise my flag for honor
and cling to what set me on this ridge...

Picture perfect smiles,
children laughing,
the games we play,
and rewards for constant effort.
These are but a few of my arsenals.

Nature only shelters my enemy,
but these moments, you and me,
they hold my stability
for achievement.

The battle still rages,
but the king has long since fallen.
Now, it is territory
I must fight to reclaim.

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  • Crash Into Me
    January 24, 2008

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    Simplicity to drown out my complexity

     

     

     hahahha im pretty damn sure NOTHING could drown out your complexity hun,,

    but these moments, you and me,
    they hold my stability

     

     

        mmhm. god how i miss that,

     

     

    lovely poem babe.

     

    ♥ ♥

    [[alexsis]] 


  • I Should Kill You
    January 12, 2008

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    Nature only shelters my enemy,
    but these moments, you and me,
    they hold my stability
    for achievement.

    [I fuckn love it]


  • xXxBeautiful SinxXx
    January 10, 2008
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    Wow

    If I interpreted correctly...and forgive me if I didnt. It appears to me as a struggle within one's self, disatisfied with life, but pretending to be content. To fight on and make it through another day. With love and support from others [or just one person in particular] to keep you holding on and striding forward. Every man's struggle.

    I tried -lol-
    But that is what I come to understand after reading this.

    If i'm correct and even if im not. I thought it was absolutely beautiful in a tragic way. Word use was excellent. [my word use sucks so I applaud you for that].

    Excellent write. Enjoyed reading it. =]


    • Menace
      January 10, 2008
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      You are very close on your interpretation. I struggle with depression and being an addict/perfectionist I am never satisfied. I have no one special person (a good reason for depression), but I find simple details other people overlook are what keeps me going.


      • xXxBeautiful SinxXx
        January 10, 2008

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        Ahhh....see im not very good at these things.
        Interpretation, I must say, isnt one of my strong points.
        lol
        But it makes more sense now that you explained. =]


  • Festering Eye Sore
    January 9, 2008
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    I like.


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    January 8, 2008
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    Nice

    I love it. Excellent.
    <3 Rogue

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