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I can see it in your eyes

Sadness befalls your eyes my lady

a painful shadow hides your smile

your eyes pleading caress upon mine

as if to lift this vale of grief

Magic I`ll work for you my fair lady

spells I shall cast upon your way

to gods and demons, invocations

to Earth and Moon, I`ll place my plea.

But then, could my love and only

cure and soothe, your pained heart?

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    December 16, 2008
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    That poem I wrote for you and it was the poem that brought us together
    Are you trying to tell me that your eyes were sad then because you were sorry of a love you lost?
    Maybe i am a fool, and did not know
    Nice one love


  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Too much sadness blinds some eyes so they cannot see love until after its gone. These eyes look back in sorrow


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 11, 2008

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    The most beautiful heart felt words I have read in a long time...To go to the most loving ends to sooth the heart of a dear friend...Tenderness and love flows from your magic pen my dear Brother


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    January 8, 2008

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    A very beautiful piece of work for your friend.
    The words chosen say so much, I hope she likes this.

    All the best...Sue


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 8, 2008

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    A LOVELY DEDICATION!!!!

    I'm sure your sweet and touching words will lift up your friend.


  • Decorus Somnium
    January 8, 2008

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    Wow this is very good. Short but full of emotions and love. I really love it. Such a good piece of poetry.
    Keep writing

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