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I Am

I am the wanter, the begger, the taker,
I am the liar, the deceiver, the faker,

I am the believer, the worshiper, the prayer,
I am the shephard, the sheep, the slayer,

I am the lunatic, the disturbed, the insane,
I am the genius, the artist, the ordained,


Am I to follow, or am I to lead?
Am I to want, and desire, and need?
Can I truly live without anger and greed?
Or is it a part of my social breed?

You say there can only be one truth to be true,
If there is one then why can't there be two,
Why should I listen to what you tell me to do,
If someone is right, who says that someone is you?

I am the wealthy, the mighty, the high,
I am the meak, the quiet, the shy,

I am the player, the loser, the winner,
I am the heathen, the saint, the sinner,

I am the body the spirit the soul,
I am the individual, the society, the whole.

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  • we lit a flame
    February 8, 2008
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    -and also- a syncopated rhythm- which is rare- great job!

  • we lit a flame
    February 8, 2008

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    I am speechless.
    This is perfect.
    Thought-provoking, blunt and direct, admirable, and very relatable.
    One of my immediate likes.