she looks in the mirror to see
the pain he has caused her
for so long.
the hardest part wasnt loving him
it was him loving her
so she takes the knife
one last time
and draws a line of red
its her release
she misses him
she misses his touch
she misses his voice
she wants everything back
as she slowly fades into death
she remembers all along
she was the other woman
A contest entry
- Give me a [ 2 ] heartbeat catastrophe {watching you love her} by CatastrophicSmile.
500 points, ended January 31, 2008, 22 entries
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This is really good I know what its like to feel this thanks -
omg this is exactly what i'm going through... this write gave me chills. although it's not exactly prose material, idc it's an amazing write. i love it, thankyou so much for entering.
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