There is no fault my love
Just a sorry circumstance
And sincere soft wishes
Broken on the shores of a dream.
Your heart speaks true
Like your eyes which copy its song,
That kiss that captured the soul,
Is like a perfect conception
Of desire, of connection,
A journey inward that is a light
A colour that mixes to a beauty
Unspoken before in my heart,
Your breath fills me with joy
But alas mine heart is not big enough,
To fulfill thy dreams of happiness.
Coldness touches my core
As that light gently extinguishes,
My hope filled smiles
Return into the darkened hood.
A spark of my hope nestles your heart
Still ready to explore our dreams,
A sensual and such fond reality
One that would light the lover’s paths
And end night forever.
08/01/08
Author notes
PLease if anyone comments on this poem nobody call me by my name or screen name as the contest has to be annonymous ..thank you
A contest entry
- Experiment by Dienush.
3550 points, ended January 31, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This poem is very romantic, and the title is catchy and fits well. I like some lines such as
"There is no fault my love
Just a sorry circumstance"
that beginning speaks volumes to me, maybe because I think I can relate.
As for the experimental part of my contest, I don't think you were on the "subjects" list, were you?
Thanks a lot for your contest entry
~Diana
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