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Walking in in the hallway,
I turn and see you kiss her,
She said you werent dateing,
But I guess it was just all lies,
I said I didnt like you,
when really your all I think about,
now I sit alone and cry,
wishing I would just die.

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Today, i saw one of my so called friends kiss the guy that i like and I wrote this sper of the moment

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  • scars-of-yesterday
    January 9, 2008

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    I like this poem, although Im sorry that you wrote it beacause your friend was kissing the guy you like. Girls can be that way. Thats why most of my friends are guys.