Once upon a summers dream with flowers all around,
The sun shone down it glowed unique,
Happiness floats in a sky so blue,
fields of beauty my heart sees,
The ghost of peace whispers in my ear,
The calm of a whispering air flow.
Author notes
Username, Poetess12. Lines used from these poems,
Beautiful Dream, My Lucky Penny, A Happy Day,
The Beauty Of Love, Ghost Whisper Of Love, Freedom Of Wind.
A contest entry
- Reiterated Recyclings by EnigmaticMonday.
700 points, ended January 23, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I have a very rhythmic ear and the first two lines just caught me in it's rhythm, but I had to let go of it when the next line came. However, I like the way you have chosen your lines to make this poem. They all apply well and the subject is breezy like a summers day dream. Very nicely written. I shall write more later. Thank you for entering my contest. E-M
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