P.S I love you,
words taken with your last breath.
Bright light surrounded,
warmth from up above.
Tears flow down a saddened face.
Too many to count,
now gone.
P.S I love you.
words I should have spoken,
said before your flight.
Destiny arrived,
you dissapeared.
My heart forever yours,
my angel from up above.
P.S I love you.
Author notes
WillAlwaysLove....P.S I love you is from another poem of mine, I hope I did it right!
A contest entry
- Reiterated Recyclings by EnigmaticMonday.
700 points, ended January 23, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes, options, a prompt and a picture by my1lovewearsdiapers.
400 points, ended January 19, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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this is beautiful and well written i like the flow and i enjoyed reading this thank you for entering
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The poem is good, but you have not fully followed the rules. Would it be possible if you could go back and read the rules to see what you have missed? Thank you E-M
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Nice Poem. It's a sad sentiment though. One I cannot fully relate to and hope not for a long time yet. HUGS for you though! Dari xxx
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beautiful
nice sentiment....lost love is hard...in death it's sometimes unbarable
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