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Time.

Silky softness,
replaced with scars,
Endless horizons,
seem far away now.
A single moment,
now deflated in my minds eye.

Time is no friend of mine.

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 9, 2008
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    lovely. Be careful with the cliche "mind's eye"