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evidence

plastic piece

feel my ridges


edge over . .

pristine contents


don't throw me

imagine disdain


precious contents

live to sin


lubricants remain

filthy end . .

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prompt: Condom Wrapper

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    the choppiness of the piece adds to the effect of a one night stand that just wants to get it over and done with anywho, I like the way you expressed it, nicely done thanks for entering"


  • CherryOnTop
    January 12, 2008
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    Wow!!This is amazingly clever and the imagery is superb!!!