Oh God
you are the watch maker
specifically of those life watches
which you implant in us
before transferring us at the nature
catering to the longevity of its operation
and when it end we do expire
Oh God...
A contest entry
- and heaven can't wait 10 x 10 by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended January 9, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such a wonderful way to express his plans for us.God bless and best wishes in the contest.
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Thoughtful
We are all watching a ticking clock that will stop
and then we will be obsorbed by what is next. Jane
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as always, your prayers and pelas are simply gently and gratifyingly beautiful.
Check, "when it ends" -
good luck in this contest poet. Great wisdom here.
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a good take on the picture and prompt.
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