Endure the hands of time
For the arms outstreched
Lead you on a journey
A path of greater wisdom
Of learning lifes values
To find ways of understanding
The essence of others and
The very being of self
Know the pains of suffering
Feel life and know you are alive
A contest entry
- and heaven can't wait 10 x 10 by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended January 9, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you began with a great metaphor and then slipped in to telling me rather than showing me. ty so much for entering.
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interresting take on the pic, and like the end feel life and know you are alive, leaves it open ended for death or life.
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wow this is an amazing take on the prompt sis and really holds so m within it. well done and best of luck
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wow this is an amazing take on the prompt sis and really holds so m within it. well done and best of luck
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