give in to some flesh rewards
be somebody behind amber lies
disgusting sex is never pretty
disguise it all for filthy profit
lust in with your bulging . .
bottom
Author notes
picture prompt: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2384/752.jpg?1199804495
A contest entry
- What Do You See Now ?? (Round 5) by just mercedes.
550 points, ended January 11, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your entry to the contest, and your honest reaction to the prompt. I admit I was perplexed by this poem, and have looked again and again at the prompt, trying to follow you. You are right, /disgusting sex is never pretty/. But that is what you saw, and you wrote accordingly, and for that I applaud you.
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Powerful piece here, I found it quite a sad comment on the state of society.
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Wow. I don't honestly think people can write about those kinds of pictures, But when I looked at it and then read your piece, It matched. Good Luck in your contest.
[♥]Nicotine
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