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Pillar

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Seawater stew of sky
a dirty desert day
fog scuttling down a mountain

and she is woman wrapped
prior to turning to salt

that comes from tears
cried so long they were rubbed porcelain
from trying to be brave

and failing.



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Prompt - Image credit: Standing Alone © Scott Hutchison


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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 10, 2008

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    This made me cry. How beautifully simple this image is presented. Wonderful work. Impressive entry. Thank you so much. ~Pamela


  • penman gold member
    January 8, 2008
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    Excellent

    Terrific take on the image. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Frogzter gold member
    January 8, 2008

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    Wow! It certainly makes sense to me and falls into place with the prompt, what amazes me is the link between A and B (A being the prompt and B being your amazing words of response!) Great penning mom!

    Huggles,

    Frogz~


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 8, 2008

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    Excellent take of the prompt Dear, this is wonderful


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