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Menage a trois pour ma femme

Clit she’s exposed as she lies waiting, naked, eager
Invading your mouth with tongue, his hands explore smoothness
Nipples grow and come to life between your knowing fingers
Dipping down to pussy, next to cock, hard and strong, all yours
In between these you writhe, in pastel pink, your dream come true
Lying back, firm breasts against your own, soft fingers juicy, wet
Inside hard calloused digits, reaching your very core
Cock rising, replacing fingers, deep plunging amidst the blonde
In view, juicy cunt before your face, dark, wet, glistening, taste, feed
Overhead, he, she, tongues clash, your hands on tits, squeezing
Up further it goes, cock in cunt, lips sucking on clit, hands squeeze tits
Slick sweat on three, exploding into one, fulfillment a trios

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  • doyouloveit
    March 22, 2008

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    truly deserved of the gold one of the hottest erotic writes I've ever read in such sweet shortness would love to read more poetry from you


  • Glasyalabolas
    March 19, 2008

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    I like this, it is fast paced, a flurry of body parts, frantic, urgent, almost confusing at times, but that is how exactly a threesome must be and how it must feel.

    Good write.


  • DrunkenRam
    March 18, 2008
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    Geez! now I need a shower.

  • carole21
    March 18, 2008

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    expresses well the sex act in a tasteful manner . . liked "his hands explore smoothness" and "fulfillment a trios" . . moves well and gives the reader a sense of participation . . congrats on the trophy


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    January 8, 2008

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    Ohhhhh now thats a damn hot threesome of a write.
    And quite possibly just how I imagaine it to be pussys, cock, fingers lips,sweat and three explode as one

    I loved the fast pace to this, it felt so appropriate and only added to heat behind the words even more....

    FRIGGIN AWESOME erotic writing here.......which means you god damn turned me on
    and my man is sitting next to me and wellllllll.....

    say no more

    Final note is one word Mindblowing

    thank you and good luck


    Cindy

    • NotTheDroids
      January 8, 2008
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      Merci

      I'm glad you like it - always been a dream of my own - who knows, perhaps one day!

      • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
        January 8, 2008
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        Merci

        prehaps LOL
        I forgot too, I wanted to ask exactly what the title means. I can make an assumption, in regards to the poem but I really have no idea lol. So clever though that caught my eye a lot being creative to write the title in another language


        Cindy
        • NotTheDroids
          January 9, 2008
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          Translation

          Menage a trois (pronounced men-aj a twa)is a French phrase meaning a household set up so that 3 persons are in a joint sexual relationship, either a married couple with a joint lover, or just 3 persons, normally of mixed sexes, who live together and have an intermingled sexual relationship. It has also come to mean any kind of sexual relationship involving 3 people. Hence - a threesome.

          pour ma femme (pronounced poor ma fam) means for my wife

          So the full title says A Threesome For My Wife - sounds like a winning title, huh?

          • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
            January 9, 2008
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            Translation

            I thought I had heard the word manage a trois before lol

            But yep indeed a winning title and it only confirms that I made the right decision
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