Open all channels to move your senses.
Disregard all feather's that blew in your way.
Become fluid and borne up.
leaf like fall in the balm of these aching arms.
Set your soul a sail in this deep
and colorful ocean of life
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Comments
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this is not what I consider rhyme. The rules specify rhyme
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Commentary
The previous commentator said it best: soothing, beautiful and calming. But at the same time, I had found myself reading the last two lines out loud to really get the understanding of it correctly. Nevertheless good luck and keep penning -
very soothing and beautiful! Calm words leaving me in a relaxed feel..i like the simplicity of the write!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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