Used and abused,
When it still has years too go
My body has giving up
My soul just exploring
The pain coming and going
Stress closing in
I have no where to turn
But to start on myself
With no one listening
Running empty on fuels
Legs can’t support me
I’m crashing and burning
The places I wanted to go
Were only dreams in my eyes
I only wish to make it another day
Now living in my prison
Watching the world around me
Living their dream
I’m nothing but this empty shell
That was once full of life
Always remember the days
When I was free to be me
Author notes
This is how I feel at the moment. Too much pain and stress from everybody.
A contest entry
- You have COMPLETE CREATIVE FREEDOM!!!!!!!! by Twosoulsasone.
465 points, ended January 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I totally can relate to this write. Sometimes i feel like life is jst too much to handle, and then i remember that things could always be worse. this is a great write, has alot of emotion and that is great. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Hell yes
I know just how you feel. Damn good job expressing it in a poetic form. I can so relate to how you feel. Kudos to you!
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