Not what you see on the outside
Full of little surprises
I'm just me
And if you delve too deep
You'll learn secrets of everyone
That everyone despises
I'm different than what you think
Though I'm deep and I care
I'm just me
I love like the rest
I mourn like the rest
And I have too many feelings to share
Many layered and confusing
Don't ask me what I'm thinking
I'm just me
So complicated and refreshing
With each new thought that I think
Brain going wild behind eyes blinking
Author notes
Just felt like writing something deep. Please let me know what you think, because this poem is 100% true.
Does this seem dark to you??? It isn't supposed to be...and I'm not, so I hope it doesn't seem dark! Anyway, I'm funny and crazy most of the time, and Lifes Sorrow, I'd like to be your 2nd cousin four times removed. Ok, kidding, how about a sis? My name's teddybearhugz, btw.
A contest entry
- In Search of an AP Familyy!!! by With Broken Wings.
300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 18 entries
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Its an awesome poem, I love it... umm yeah, i changed my name from Lifes Sorrow to Eternally With You, and umm.. yeah.. lol I would love to have you as my 2nd cousin four times removed jaja... unless u dont want to.. if u prefer just a sis, sure too.. whatever you want!! =]
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And i believe it! this is so great. i love how you created a pattern where you put "I'm just me" in the third line of every stanza.
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Thanks for the comment and glad you liked it!
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