I know my heart loves you,
but my head disagrees.
I know its not sensible,
but my soul still believes.
I cant stop it beating,
I wont look away,
I know it's just stupid,
but I want you to stay.
My friends all stay it's silly,
they think that they all know best,
but I know how I feel,
and that means much more than the rest.
Open your mind and let me in,
promise that you'll try,
if you just try to hear my thoughts,
then I know that we can fly.
So tell me you love me,
and I'll smile again,
Ill never ask for anything,
because I'm with you. Amen!
Author notes
Inspired by Losing you but trying not to,
by GodsSinfulMistake
A contest entry
- You have COMPLETE CREATIVE FREEDOM!!!!!!!! by Twosoulsasone.
465 points, ended January 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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that's such an amazing write gabs!!! I love it! it's soooo beautiful and inspirational. I especially love the fisrt two stanzas:
I know my heart loves you,
but my head disagrees.
I know its not sensible,
but my soul still believes.
I cant stop it beating,
I wont look away,
I know it's just stupid,
but I want you to stay.
good luck in the contest
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This is an amzing write. I absolutly love it and it totally goes with some of the things that i am feeling right now. Excellent write i love the feeling behind it and the meaning that it has. Good job and thank you for entering my contest.
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