Radiating beauty,
With flow of curves.
Lust now reaching to every nerve.
Indigo blue eyes, looking deep into my soul.
Filling my heart, making it whole.
Far beyond, sandy shores,
Love explores.
(C) Nichole A.Dustin
1/7/2008
Author notes
Metaphorical love poem. Picture prompt ..picture above.
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
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Excellent.
I think that is a philopsophy everyone should practice, certainly it would save hard feelings and may promote peace. You have a beautiful graphic and the wording is fine.
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You've got the syllable count on the first and last line wrong, other than that a gr8 write.Best of luck in the contest
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My goodness I do, ty for letting me know. Sorry my Lyme disease Brain kicks in at times. I didn't even notice.
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I like the form you chose, those syllable count poems are always a challenge and I think you did it very well.
Thank you for entering and keep on writing!
-Laura -
The flow of this poem is effortlessly written and the words deeply felt. There is a feel of adoration to your words. A lovely poem poet. Thank you for sharing. I am familiar with the form but cannot recall the proper name. The "Rictameter" has 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 Your words fit the graphic art to a tee.
Either way, the poem is lovely.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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