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Flower

Sweet smelling flower
Petals lush and colorful
Pollen sticks to nose

Author notes

Just another haiku...hmm...I'm writing a lot tonight! Funny, the one night I should be doing homework...please comment!

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 21, 2008

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    this is a cute little haiku I love haikus lol You did a great job with this i like the aha line hehe reminds me of a bee hoping from flower to flower

  • Linny9
    February 28, 2008
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    Nice haiku.