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Terrified Tonight?

My eyes followed her,
as she sauntered down the dark alleyway
in her torn dress.
I watched her gaze nervously,
eyes aglow with wild terror.
The moon was but a sliver in the sky,
reflecting its majesty
off her liquid green globes,
before she rounded the corner.

I pursued.

There was something about her -

made my skin itch with desire,

a familiar pulse

from within my nether-regions.

 

There - at the end of the alley

she stood, panting

(Oh, how I would make her pant)

trapped, with no where to go.

No weapons, no defense.

 

I grabbed her by the wrist

as she tried to escape.

I whispered softly to her as I forced her close

her breasts pressed hard against mine.

 

I urged my lips against hers,

tasting with the tip of my tongue,

the edges of my teeth.

 

And just before she fainted,

wilting like a flower in my grasp,

I whispered into the wind.

 

Tonight...you are mine.



 

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I actually had a lot of fun writing this. Thank you for making the contest! I hope more people enter!

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  • Wild-N-Wiccan
    February 11, 2008
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    O Wow, cool. Lots of emotion to say the least!


  • second-born
    January 13, 2008

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    Thank you for sharing this dark write...you certainly know how to capture the attention of your readers with this piece...


    • volcaniclastic
      January 13, 2008
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      Thank you It all started off with a girl with green eyes, and went from there. I tend to write about her quite often, though I don't know if I have any on the site right now. I did some stories a while back...I think they might be hiding in my closet.


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    January 11, 2008

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    Wow! For a second you had me thinking of something else. Very intense. Awesome format. Good luck in the contest. Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~


    • volcaniclastic
      January 11, 2008
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      Only honourable mention - the host wanted something a littler juicier - but thank you

      Blessings.


  • lesbian-in-love
    January 10, 2008

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    Wow. That was great. I loved this one. Maybe you should take a look at my contest http://allpoetry.com/contest/2384884. Thanks so much for the read and keep it up.


  • Mistermuggs
    January 8, 2008
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    Very good.

    I really like how you left it up to the readers imaginations at the end.


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    January 8, 2008

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    Great job. I really liked it. I always host erotic poems but never this type of erotica. I need entries and I hope, too, that people enter. I am going to allow more than one entry so if you want to write another one, go ahead. Again, awesome job! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.

    • volcaniclastic
      January 8, 2008
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      You're welcome. I was in need of a muse last night. Since school ended, I'm in this nothing-to-do limbo, waiting for my job position to start. I've been writing a lot to fill up time. It wasn't initially going to be this type of poem, but it's how it ended - because of its nature, I decided to leave out the juicier details, and just give an impression of erotica. I don't know if I could write a rape poem, anyhow.

      If I come up with any other great entries, I'll post them.

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