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Love in Reverse

Moments shared between bodies bare,
arouse me intensely, as I caress your hair.
Hands gently start to sway,
as your mouth begins to play.
Within a moments ring,
a shout then hollar, when pleasure sings.
I move forward and ride real slow,
you move in reverse, grinding the back hole.
A smile to your lips,
as your hands grips my hips.
How about love in reverse?
You will stand behind me, just like we rehearsed.
Your hands on my cheeks, as you dig in,
I moan with pleasure as you shove it within.
Nice and tight, I hear you loud,
a quick thrust, your nuts bust, you begin to howl.
A added strap on, I have my way,
love in reverse, as I screw YOU today.

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yes another! one crazy ass!

Title given by: PerVirtuous Allan

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  • Griswold silver member
    January 12

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    Go Tory, go Tory, Well, he does come up with some interesting prompts for sure baby...Love you...Scott

  • wow! very well done, intriguing. sensual and immense. powerful descriptions. xx
  • wow the imagery and descriptions within this flow bring that amazing sensual touch t it and is so powerful well done mom and keep penng. miss you and love you...lots


  • Lord Merlynn
    January 7

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    A smile to your lips,
    as your hands grips my hips.

    as your hands grips my hips.. too many plurals there hun. Might sound better if you say "as your hands grip my hips" just a thought.

    A added strap on. A should be An

    other than those two little things, typos I trust, I like it. very erotic, although you would come near this old boy with a strap on toy. keep up the great writing hun.

  • PerVirtuous gold member
    January 7

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    Bwahahahahaha.... The NOW convention will love BOTH of our poems! Ha ha ha. This is priceless and I think you outdid me. You win this round.


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      January 7

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      LMAO well where the hell you think i could take it??? Shit I win this round coming from you I feel honored..damn may even throw me a party...Go TORY GO TORY wooooohoooo wooohooo...



      • PerVirtuous gold member
        January 7
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        Don't get too carried away.... there are many rounds to come...
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