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Cry, Baby,Cry

Cry, Baby, Cry
Scream until your lungs bleed
Until your pain subsides
&& From your chains you're freed.

Cry, Baby, Cry
Until your eyes can't see
Baby, Just know that your needs I'll supply
Just cry my precious BumbleBee.


Cry,Baby, Cry
Keep them from leaving
Keep them from saying good-bye.
Just don't let them be deceiving.

Cry, Baby, Cry
Just let everything out
And then die.
No more self doubt


Just cry baby cry
Cry
Baby
Cry
Cry

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Yeah so it's scattered but I enjoy it.

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  • HiddenxSecrets
    January 7, 2008

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    I enjoyed it too. Very nice piece, deep and I enjoyed your rhyming in this. A little short, but I loved it. Check out some of mine.

    HxS