Whatever you say,
whatever you feel,
goes through me,
until,
your gone.
Whatever you do,
whatever you make,
simply means,
love has ended,
no more.
Whatever you get,
whatever you don't,
you'll never love me,
like you did,
your gone again.
I get the fact,
I'll never have you,
goodbye,
sweet love.
Author notes
I don't know what enspired this. I guess it was that my friend is going through a rough time because her on and off boyfriend is moving...and I saw im cheating on her...telling her.
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This is a very intersting write. I think that there is a story behind it, but for me it was a little too difficult to follow. It feels a little empty in a way if you know what i mean. I think it is a good write though, every thing written from the heart is good, i just dont think there is enough for me. Good luck.
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