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Closer To Insanity

Loneliness fills my soul tonight
Trying to convince myself that I'm alright

Thoughts race madly through my head

I guess this is better then feeling dead

 

Suffocating emotion threatens to overcome

This feeling of dread has yet again begun 

Drowning me in agonzing fear 

The end of me is finally near

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  • Violent Glass
    February 23

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    Beautiful... I can relate to this all to well, i've had depression about 4 years now and i know this feling you describe, i feel it quite alot, great write, i think you did a great job, and you did it so simply, i loved it, thanx for sharing it with me!


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    i think you did a very great job with your piece here good luck to you in the contest


  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 18, 2008
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    Its a great poem, Thanks so much for entering my contest. Good luck
    ♥ Christina


  • Condemd RyeZing
    February 6, 2008

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    Great. I really liked the rhyming. It wasn't forced like most rhyming poems. good job. thanksfor entering.


  • timberwolf1313
    January 28, 2008
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    i like the way you rymed threw this


  • lesbian-in-love
    January 8, 2008

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    Oh wow very interesting. I really like this one. I can somewhat relate to this one. Thanks for the read and keep it up.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    January 8, 2008
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    This was really good! Just seeing the first two lines on the preview intrugued me... :-D


  • Broken Machine
    January 7, 2008

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    Beautiful. I can relate. But for the last line on the first stanza wouldn't it sound better if it were "being dead" instead of "feeling dead" cause do you know what feeling dead is like? I don't. Well actually I do. Cause I'm dead inside but you know what I'm gonna shut up now. Just ignore that please. ( =
    Great poem. I'm here for ya
    <3

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