Somewhere hidden in a valley lost
A weaver of spells did wait
For time that was yet to come
A spell to seal his fate
Lost love was the reason then
As into darkness he did slide
Remembering her was heartfelt pain
That drove him then to hide
A curse was part of the spell
With the pain of a lost love
That she would feel deep within
When light faded from above
Magick can then serve the dark
In the recesses of the soul
And for her alone with tears
Was his obsessive goal
A contest entry
- Weave Me Into Your Magick Spell by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended January 14, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow!!
What images You have brought forth through Your weaving of words
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
A curse was part of the spell
With the pain of a lost love
That she would feel deep within
When light faded from above
Loved these lines~~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too my Friend
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Ooh, you took the other route with this. But I like it. Can feel the emotion in the piece. Well done.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
Fine poet, your poem is worthy of a hug and a smile
and this>>> It is lovely.
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With this poem, you make me see well how life, feelings and words are the true magic here - for you have woven a spell! A good write!
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Love it! You are a spell weaver with your words John!!
Hmmm.. where can I get me some of that magic to cast over someone?? lol
Wonderful as always!
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well done John as always
your words are woven magic.
best wishes to you in this contest
Victoria
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Awesome work with this it is really good Good luck with this in the contest
Redwing Spirit
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